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Ibuki by Kurai12 Ibuki by Kurai12
this is my brothers O.C he just made me draw it

O.C (c) By my big brother
drawing (c) by Me
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Critique by HumbleArtist123 Jan 19, 2012, 1:28:26 PM
This is by far the best picture that I've seen, that I critiqued that is. Anyway, here I go.

PROPORTIONS: They are perfect. Except the chin, it looks a bit lopsided.
COLOUR: The colouring is good. All the manga artists that I've seen can do WAY better, but it's good. Al least you didn't scribble.
STYLE: Your style is something that I saw from a manga artist, actually.
UNIQUENESS: COnsidering that the concept for the character's based around the Espada from the manga BLEACH, it isn't unique at all.
OVERALL: I like it, keep up the good work.
See you.
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wakaflockaflame1 Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice job,she yo oc?
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Kurai12 Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no shes my older brother's OC but thanks
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wakaflockaflame1 Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well,nice jobs :D.
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Princess-Neko-ChanXO Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
she's cute! :3
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Kurai12 Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks~
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